Finished one part of a dialogue line
- baetendirk
- 7 nov 2017
- 1 minuten om te lezen
For the first scene in this environment, I have two moments where you can make a choice. I finished one line of the dialogue there which now continues with a dance part. I prefer to finish one whole story branch in this place before continuing writing the dialogue etc for another choice option. As usual I have no idea yet what I am going to do here. I really make the story phrase by phrase, image by image, improvising all the time, but all within the global story setting that I already have in my mind.
In my first version of this novel that I made with images from video clips, I had two different night clubs like this one, each with very unique events. I am however dropping the specific story lines from those completely and I am reimagining everything from scratch. This said, when I feel that it's the right thing to do, I might still get parts from my earlier version and insert them here again.
I am still thinking about having a name for this night club. I would like to add some text on the wall somewhere, but I am not sure yet how I am going to do this.